Hey all! Would love your feedback on this one! @stephanie thoughts?
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Hi! Thanks for posting. Would like to hear feedback from other members… I think you made a nice effort this time personalizing the story. Didn’t it feel better? Maybe start with the nat sound of nasa … where is that video from though? Could you have written to that specific video rather than making a general statement about being every kid’s dream? I see where you are going but not sure it really is every kid’s dream! Nice progress! @darlene-melendez it’s your time to post!